Hi guys. I haven't been on the AI forums for a long time(school, etc), but I did want to come back and get some advice from you guys.

I've worked on a small research project, which I wrote a paper for and entered in the Siemens Westinghouse Competition. I didn't place, but I am now preparing for the Intel Science+Engineering Fair.

I was wondering if you guys could look at my abstract, and better yet my paper, and tell me what you think. I am not sure if I am heading in the right direction.

This can be found here.

Thanks in advance!
- Sagar